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\begin{en}
\section{General information about the work done}
Since 19 october 2017, I work with \textit{Agomir S.p.A.}\cite{agomir:website}
Since 19 October 2017, I have been working with \textit{Agomir S.p.A.}\cite{agomir:website}
(vendor and producer of software, networking solutions and services for small
and mid-size
industries) doing an extended school internship on a weekly basis (thursdays
and fridays, in the afternoon). I am involved in developing accounting
software, writing multiplatform smartphone applications (that work
industries) doing an extended school internship on a weekly basis (Thursdays
and Fridays, in the afternoon). I am involved in developing accounting
software, writing multiplatform smartphone applications (which work
with both Android and iOS) to be precise. In order to do this, I am using tools
such as \textit{Ionic Framework}\cite{ionic:website} and \textit{Apache
Cordova}\cite{cordova:website}.
This type of approach to the mobile world makes development more easy because
This type of approach to the mobile world makes development easier because
instead of using APIs and platform-dependent code it is possible to use
well-known and standardized technologies such as HTML and Javascript.
Naturally, these apps require more system resources and they generally are
@ -180,12 +180,12 @@
existing products from the company, to plan new projects, and for suggestions
in general.
In spite of the lack of control I have in regard to the projects I work on, I
Even though I do not have total control on the projects I work on, I
am still responsible for defining development milestones and making
time estimates for the completion of these.
time estimates for their completion.
In order to increase the work force assigned to the development of mobile
apps, I have managed training sessions for some employees in order to show
apps, I have organised training sessions for some employees in order to show
them how the tools that I use work.
\end{en}
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\begin{description}
\item[Customers' orders] for registering the products customers may order;
\item[Customers and suppliers] for looking up record data of customers and
\item[Customers and suppliers] for looking up data record of customers and
suppliers;
\item[Calendar] for viewing and editing events on the ERP calendar, syncable
\item[Calendar] for viewing and editing events on the ERP calendar, synchronizable
with \textit{Outlook};
\item[Warehouses] for managing warehouses and inventories.
\end{description}
@ -237,12 +237,12 @@
In addition to what specified above, users will be able to register working
hours for business trips. This feature is already implemented in
\textit{InteGRa.Service}, an app developed in a previous school internship
period. The two apps can not be merged immediately due to relevant
differencies in their respective architectures.
period. The two apps cannot be merged immediately due to relevant
differences in their respective architectures.
Finally, the app will be able to work (with limited functionalities) without
a network link with \textit{InteGRa}, offering data syncronization when a
connection will be avaliable.
connection will be available.
\end{en}
\begin{it}
@ -304,7 +304,7 @@
\end{itemize}
\end{it}
\begin{en}
In the picture \ref{fig:itgmobliearch} is shown how the software components
Picture \ref{fig:itgmobliearch} shows how the software components
in the app interact with each other. This architecture was entirely realized
by me, on the basis offered by the project \textit{InteGRa.Service}. Further
information is given in the following list.
@ -594,12 +594,12 @@ public abstract class ReadableRESTController<T extends Readable,
classe ``entità'' \textit{T}, che a sua volta estende \textit{Readable}.
\end{it}
\begin{en}
Even the listing \ref{lst:rdbrest-java} needs a brief explaination. The
abstract class \textit{Readable}, used as constraint for the class first generic
Even listing \ref{lst:rdbrest-java} needs a brief explanation. The
abstract class \textit{Readable}, used as a constraint for the class first generic
parameter, is the father of each ``entity'' class, while
\textit{PrimaryKey<T>} is the father of the class that contains the primary
key of \textit{T}. An instance the \textit{PrimaryKey<T>} child is embedded as
an attribute in the ``entity'' class \textit{T}, which itself extends \textit{Readable}.
key of \textit{T}. An instance of the \textit{PrimaryKey<T>} child is embedded as
an attribute in the ``entity'' class \textit{T}, which extends \textit{Readable}.
\end{en}
\begin{it}
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\end{it}
\begin{en}
The \textit{CRUDable} class extends \textit{Readable} and offers
some methods useful for object initialization based on input data given
some useful methods for object initialization based on data input given
as \textit{MultivaluedMap<String,String>}. Therefore, the ``entity''
classes that extend \textit{CRUDable} can be used for read-write operations,
e.g. the ones implemented in \textit{CRUDRESTController}.
@ -840,11 +840,11 @@ public abstract class CRUDUtils {
\begin{en}
\subsubsection{\textit{restaurant} -- client side}
The client portion of the \textit{restaurant} library is implemented with the
\textit{TypeScript} progamming language, an extension of \textit{Javascript}
\textit{TypeScript} programming language, an extension of \textit{Javascript}
offering static typing, common OOP constructs and generics support. The
following listings describes the \textit{RESTService} class interface, which
contains some static methods useful to exchange data asyncronously with the
server in the form of instances of ``entity'' classes, inheriters of the
contains some static methods useful to exchange data asynchronously with the
server in the form of instances of ``entity'' classes, inheritors of the
abstract class \textit{Table}.
\end{en}
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\begin{en}
The Gantt diagram in figure \ref{fig:ganttitgmob} was not followed: the
project was not completed within the end of May. However, the most important
piece of software that did have to be working by the deadline was finished:
\textit{restaurant}, with the online/offline syncronization engine and the
piece of software that had to be working by the deadline was finished:
\textit{restaurant}, with the online/offline synchronization engine and the
interface and implementation of the procedures needed for generating in an easy
fashion new sections of the app.
\end{en}
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\begin{en}
\subsection{Project phases}
The project phases originally established, by which start and end dates are shown on
The project phases originally established, by which start and end dates are shown in
the diagram in figure \ref{fig:ganttitgmob}, are described below.
\begin{description}
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algorithms used inside the library, with improvement of the last ones.
This phase is divided in:
\begin{description}
\item[Architecture revising] analisis of the protocol aimed to find weak
\item[Architecture revising] analisys of the protocol aimed to find weak
points and possible optimisations;
\item[\textit{restaurant} testing] trial of the changes implemented before;
\end{description}
@ -1184,7 +1184,7 @@ wheel balancers. This application should work as a remote desktop client
(as \textit{TeamViewer}\footnote{TeamViewer: \url{https://www.teamviewer.com}})
for the PC mounted inside their main product, an automatic wheel balancer
that works with cameras. The program should allow the user to interact with the
wheel balancing software, without needing them to exit from the veichle.
wheel balancing software, without needing them to exit from the vehicle.
Since this project was urgent for the customer, development on \textit{InteGRa
Mobile} was stopped until the end of the extended school internship period.
@ -1267,8 +1267,8 @@ Since this project was urgent for the customer, development on \textit{InteGRa
tablet containing the mobile app. In particular, \textit{guacamole-common-js} is
used in the mobile app (which is built with \textit{Apache Cordova}) in order to
make a touchscreen interface for the interacting with the remote host, while
\textit{guacamole-common}, bundled in a small Java Web Application, toghteter
with \textit{guacamole-server} are installed on the PC.
\textit{guacamole-common}, bundled in a small Java Web Application, together
with \textit{guacamole-server} is installed on the PC.
In addition, the tablet and the PC can share additional information through a
WebSocket created at the same time as the connection, which is needed by some
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\def\ganttargosstima{Time estimates for future \ldots}
\def\ganttargosimpl{Implementation of the \ldots}
\def\ganttargoszoom{Keyboard opening with zoom \ldots}
\def\ganttargosscroll{Two finger scroll}
\def\ganttargosscroll{Two-finger scroll}
\def\ganttargosconf{Settings page}
\def\ganttargoskbd{Input through native iOS or \ldots}
\def\ganttargosdemodef{Demo to the customer}
@ -1403,7 +1403,7 @@ Since this project was urgent for the customer, development on \textit{InteGRa
figure \ref{fig:ganttargos}, are listed below.
\begin{description}
\item[Meeting with the customer] first information exchanged aimed to
\item[Meeting with the customer] first information exchange aimed to
establish the project targets;
\item[Development of the first prototype] demonstration of
\textit{guacamole} as an effective protocol through a prototype;
@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ Since this project was urgent for the customer, development on \textit{InteGRa
open a keyboard;
\item[Input through native iOS or Android keyboard] substitution of the
keyboard included with \textit{guacamole-common-js} with the native one;
\item[Two finger scroll] support for vertical two finger scrolling;
\item[Two-finger scroll] support for vertical two-finger scrolling;
\item[Settings page] creation of a small configuration panel, needed to
enter the PC's IP address and port number;
\end{description}